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Let Go And Live. My poem is about how a woman in the village, which is still orthodox to some extent, picks up herself after losing her spouse and empowers herself to stand on her own feet.

8 Heart it! Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath 257
October 3, 2018
Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath
8 Heart it! 257

Let Go and Live

Pining away at losing her husband,

She paused and looked back,

Vivid memories of her carefree childhood

Came gushing back like a stream.

 

Dreams shattered; vision, a blur,

She stood still, shivering with cold,

Steaming hot tea shook her up

Unto reformation of old and new alike.

 

The village lass took the last recourse;

A self-help group for women, she signed up,

Taught to be self-reliant, financially independent,

She got woven into the fabric of the system.

 

She had been wronged, she learned,

This fulfilled her want, to prove herself,

Realization dawned, identity created,

She fought for her cause, women’s rights.

 

Approval came from all quarters,

No longer did she feel unimportant,

She was the manager of her own life,

All lived but once, she lived twice.

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8 Heart it! Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath 257
8 Heart it! 257

supratim.samantray Oct 3, 2018 7:50am

Wonderful!

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 3, 2018 8:03am

    Thank you Mr. Supratim! ?

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 3, 2018 8:04am

    Thank you Mr. Supratim!

puffter Oct 3, 2018 11:26am

Its beautifully written and very relatable. Kudos!

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 4, 2018 1:12am

    Thank you so much for your kind words! Thank you so much for liking and commenting here! 🙂

vijayakumarsrilakshmi Oct 3, 2018 9:35pm

Wow..such inspiring words, amoolya..way to go..keep amusing is with ur stirring words ..always

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 4, 2018 1:14am

    Thank you so much for your kind appreciation Sri Lakshmi! Will surely keep to it 🙂

charanya.dr Oct 3, 2018 10:27pm

wow.. inspiring.. loved each one of it..?

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 4, 2018 1:16am

    Thank you so much Charanya for your kind and thoughtful words! 🙂

charanya.dr Oct 3, 2018 10:28pm

wow.. inspiring.. loved each one of it..?

drsreekarh Oct 4, 2018 1:56am

Wow! A very heartfelt, thoughtful and insightful porse indeed! Keep ’em coming please!

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 4, 2018 3:10am

    Thank you very much for your kind appreciation Sreekar! 🙂

shailgulhati Oct 4, 2018 9:14pm

nice poem! i think the keynote is the last two lines ,’She was the manager of her own life, All lived but once, she lived twice.’ we call this dwija, the twice born 🙂
keep it up amoolya.

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 5, 2018 4:02am

    Thank you so much Shail Sir for reading my poem and explaining a beautiful philosophy! 🙂 Thank you so much for your encouragement and patronage! 🙂

kir_an Oct 5, 2018 1:19am

Awesome

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 5, 2018 4:03am

    Thank you so much Kinna! 🙂 🙂 🙂

rashmipaharia1 Oct 5, 2018 11:44pm

Beautifully written and expressed! Bravo!

    Dr. Amoolya Kamalnath Oct 6, 2018 12:41am

    Thank you so much Rashmi for your kind words! 🙂

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